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© Faewning | 01.25.17 | this is celestial -- Poetry/Free Verse/Romantic


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I'm not satisfied with the title, but other than that, I quite like this piece. Would love to know what you all think, and as always feedback is appreciated. Thanks for reading, dears! :heart:
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Given 2017-02-06
this is celestial by Faewning ( Suggested by LadyLincoln and Featured by doughboycafe )
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I love the celestial imagery throughout the first two stanzas :love:

It's too beautiful!
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Faewning Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the kind words. It's appreciated. :heart:
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, congratulations once again! :heart:
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner Edited Mar 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I feel so much longing in that last line. :(
And I know this is late, but what about "Silenced in Space" for a title? Just in case you're still looking for something different. :)
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Faewning Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. This is piece is so personal to me and so representative
of my life at the moment. I'm glad it's been well received by everyone.

Oh! I do love that. I'm not sure how I feel about changing the title at this point,
but I may do a part two and use that if you don't mind. :heart:
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
We all long for many things, sadly. I hope your longing will not last much longer.

And no I don't. <3
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PolarAnemone Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
A bit belated, but congratulations on the DD! Clap This is indeed celestial.
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Faewning Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I appreciate the support! :heart:
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zilzalisme Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017
title could be pulsar maybe.
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:iconfaewning:
Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe so :heart:
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DragonRam107 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I love these kinds of poems

good job :D
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
That means a lot! Thank you! :heart:
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DragonRam107 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome dude :)
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LichtCat Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so beautiful! It sort of reminds me of 707 from Mystic Messenger!
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not familiar with that, but I'm glad you enjoyed :heart:
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LichtCat Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
^u^
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CaptainMockingjay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved reading this. the title was what pulled me in. :love:

i love space poems. i actually wrote a poem similar to this as well with space and romance. 
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! Yes, I write way too much space/ocean
themed poetry, lol. Can you link me your piece? :heart:
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CaptainMockingjay Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah! here it is, my poem is called "Intergalactic": fav.me/d9b8lqk
it's probably your niche in poetry! :)

for a second I forgot I posted my poem (since I wrote it on my other computer/my laptop to be exact), and it was a while ago. 

I want to write more poems about gems and stars :)
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
It was great! Thanks for sharing it!

I do that, too. Way too many computers/notebooks in this flat
to keep up with what is where, lol.

And you should! It's one of my favorite themes for sure. :heart:
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SoulfulWingedOne Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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SoulfulWingedOne Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful work - love the imagery! Congrats on the DD.
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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LeviaDraconia Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Professional General Artist
:deviantart: Congrats on the DD! :heart: :clap: :deviantart:
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, dear! :heart:
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MitsunaIshi Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like your poem. In my Opinion is the universe the perfect metapher dir this Feeling. Thank you so much for wrote this down.
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, dear! :heart:
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thousand-streams Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I really liked this a lot! Galaxy related poetry mixed with romance bring joy to my soul. Beautifully worded and congratulations on the dd!
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, dear! I tend to lean towards galaxy
and ocean-themed poetry! I need to break out of my comfort
zone some haha, but I greatly appreciate the comment and
the congrats. :tighthug:
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iamthemachine Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  New Deviant Professional Writer
i relate with the imagery and dig the meaning, great piece
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Faewning Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! It means a lot :heart:
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iamthemachine Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  New Deviant Professional Writer
:)
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
Love this to the moon and back! Wow, nice work! 
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, dear! :heart:
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LyricsInLostLand Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017
Wowzer. This is really talented
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, dear! :heart:
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliantly stunning. I want to read it over and over again, and I don't always enjoy poetry like that.
Thank you, for sharing this piece. It is just amazing. :heart:
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means
the world to me, and to know that you might want to read
it again warms my heart. :heart:
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I was just beautiful! :heart:
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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PatchworkLynx Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017   Writer
I actually really like the title!
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'm glad! I think it may be growing on me, lol :heart:
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Breathtaking piece, darling. :heart:
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, dear. It means the world coming from you. :heart:
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, honey. I adore this piece and it spoke volumes to me. :heart:
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Faewning Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I must thank you again for sharing this piece. I'm touched
by how much you enjoyed it.
:blush: 5 seconds hug 
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, honey. :tighthug: :heart:
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